GUEST POST: SLIGHTLY OFF-KILTER: SONGS FOR CREATING DEMONS BY BARRY MAHER

Slightly Off-Kilter

Songs for Creating Demons

By Barry Maher

I listen to music when I write. This column for example is being created with the help ofโ€”or perhaps in spite ofโ€”a piece of music that seems to be an unfortunate blend of God Save the King and The Moldavan National Anthem. But creating my new supernatural thriller, The Great Dick: And The Dysfunctional Demon, a thriller thatโ€™s able to laugh at itself, (one reader called it โ€œHorrifying and Delightful!โ€) required an even more horrifying type of music. Music like: 

Dust by Fleetwood Mac 

Fleetwood Mac? Arenโ€™t they much too pop for horror? Actually Dust was from an early incarnation of Fleetwood Mac, with no hits and lots of drug problems, not the later version of the group with lots of hits and even more drug problems. The lyrics to Dust come from a 1909 poem by Rupert Brook, who was no bundle of sunshine.

โ€œWhen your swift hair is quiet in death
And through the lips corruption
Thrust to still the labor of my breathโ€


Midnight Mile by the Rolling Stones. 

This haunting tune about a mad day on the road โ€œwith a head full of snow,โ€ gets me picturing Keith Richards as the guitar playing, coked-up, walking dead. Perhaps not a huge stretch.


I Put a Spell on
Youย by Screaming Jay Hawkins. Writing about obsession?ย 

Hereโ€™s Screaming Jay screaming that he doesnโ€™t care if you donโ€™t want him. It doesnโ€™t matter to him at all. Heโ€™s still yours. A non-returnable gift that threatens to keep on giving.


Sheโ€™s Not There by the Zombies

This one doesnโ€™t make my list for the name of the group, but for the mood the music evokes. And the lyrics do have a touch of the sinister. In this British song, a mysterious woman is causing untold suffering, Like the singer, we can only wonder about how much she lied, with no way of telling โ€œhow many people cried.โ€ I know what youโ€™re thinking. But the song was released in 1965, considerably before Maggie Thatcher ever became Prime Minister.


No Bravery by James Blunt 

I thought this guy wrote love songs, but this one features shallow graves, burning houses, the odor of death, and dying families. I listen to this, then write horror to cheer up.ย 

Tie a Yellow Ribbonย by Tony Orlando. Not a horror classic, just a horrible song. I canโ€™t listen to it without dreaming of tying a yellow ribbon as tightly as possible around Tony Orlandoโ€™s neck. And I understand the reasoning of a homicidal demon.

Last and in so many ways least, Black Sabbathย by Black Sabbathย 

Apparently, Satan, with eyes of fire, is coming after the singer. That might explain the vocal. I think this one is from the Black Sabbath album Blue Skies, Sunny Days and Lollypops, or it may be from Kittens, Puppies and Other Easy Meals. To quote a key phrase, โ€œPlease, God help me.โ€

Take a listen. The singing sounds like a weasel caught in a meat grinder. The question this little ditty raises is more theological than musical. Namely: why would a loving God allow something like this to exist? And to somehow be a hit? When I first heard it on my car radio, I thought my transmission was disintegrating, but it was only humanityโ€™s musical taste.

Check out Barry Maherโ€™s dark humor supernatural thriller, The Great Dick: And the Dysfunctional Demon,ย on Amazon. Contact him and/or sign up for his newsletter at www.barrymaher.com.ย 


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GUEST BLOG POST: Freelance Writing: How College Students Can Turn Words Into Work By Marcie Sullivan

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Freelance Writing: How College Students Can Turn Words Into Work

Writing has quietly become one of the most adaptable freelance careers for college students and recent grads. You donโ€™t need a fancy office, expensive gear, or years of experience โ€” just clarity, consistency, and a laptop. Whether itโ€™s content writing, blogging, ghostwriting, or UX copy, the field rewards creativity and curiosity.


Core Points

  • Freelance writing lets students earn while learning, often with minimal startup costs.
  • Popular paths include content writing, ghostwriting, editing, social media copy.
  • Essential tools include grammar checkers, portfolio sites, and payment platforms.
  • Building a reputation requires consistency and responsiveness.
  • Consider forming an LLC for credibility and legal protection.

FAQs

Q1: Do I need a degree to start writing professionally?
No โ€” portfolios beat diplomas in this industry. Build samples on platforms like Medium or Substack.

Q2: What should I charge as a beginner?
Start with $0.05โ€“$0.10 per word or per-project pricing on marketplaces like Upwork.

Q3: How can I get clients fast?
Pitch via LinkedIn, use job boards like ProBlogger, and build an SEO-optimized writer profile.

Q4: Should I niche down early?
Yes โ€” specializing (e.g., sustainability, SaaS, or education) boosts trust and rates.

Q5: How do I stay organized?
Use free tools like Notion or Trello for task management.

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Why Writing Works as a Student Side Career

Unlike gig jobs or retail work, freelance writing compounds in value. Each article is a potential reference, backlink, or resume piece. The flexibility lets students:

  • Work from anywhere (libraries, dorms, cafรฉs).
  • Adjust schedules around exams.
  • Turn part-time work into full-time careers after graduation.

And unlike other jobs, writing scales with skill โ€” better words bring better clients.


Building a Freelance Writing Career From Scratch

  1. Identify Your Interest Area โ†’ Start with topics you know (tech, travel, psychology).
  2. Create 3โ€“5 Writing Samples โ†’ Post them on Medium or your blog.
  3. Build a Simple Portfolio Website โ†’ Use Carrd or WordPress.
  4. Set Up Professional Tools
    • Payment: PayPal, Wise
    • Proofreading: Grammarly
    • Document sharing: Google Docs
  5. Start Pitching Clients โ†’ Personalize outreach emails and include your best samples.
  6. Track Income and Deadlines โ†’ Use spreadsheets or free project trackers.
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Before You Take Your First Client

โœ… Have at least two polished writing samples
โœ… Know your rate (per word or per project)
โœ… Set up a professional email
โœ… Create a Google Drive folder for client work
โœ… Confirm how youโ€™ll get paid (and when)
โœ… Read the clientโ€™s brief carefully
โœ… Keep communication clear and friendly


Establishing an LLC

Establishing a business structure gives freelance writers legitimacy and protection. Forming an LLC can separate personal assets from business income, simplify taxes, and boost your professional image when dealing with clients. Filing fees differ by state, and online formation services like zenbusiness.com providers offer customizable registration packages to make setup simple and affordable.


Common Writing Niches and Average Entry Rates

NicheTypical Client TypeAverage Starting RateLong-Term Growth Potential
Tech/SaaSStartups, agencies$0.08โ€“$0.12 per wordHigh (retainer potential)
Lifestyle/HealthBlogs, brands$0.05โ€“$0.10 per wordModerate
Finance/BusinessFintech, education sites$0.10โ€“$0.15 per wordHigh
Academic EditingStudents, journals$20โ€“$40 per hourSteady
UX/Product CopyApps, software companies$50โ€“$150 per projectHigh

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Even professional writers rely on proofreading and editing software. Grammarly helps refine tone, clarity, and consistency โ€” a must-have for freelancers handling multiple clients at once. Use it alongside style guides or editing frameworks for clean, confident delivery.


Freelance writing isnโ€™t just a side hustle โ€” itโ€™s a foundation for creative independence. With focus, structure, and a bit of persistence, college students can turn their curiosity into cash and their skills into sustainable careers. Writing is one of the few jobs where learning and earning evolve together โ€” and thatโ€™s a pretty smart start.

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BLOG TOUR: LET BIRDS FLY BY RHEA THOMAS GUEST POST – Why I Started Writing Short Stories

Blog Tour – Why I Started Writing Short Stories

By Rhea Thomas

Iโ€™ve thought about this a lot because itโ€™s become a common question I get. Why do I write short stories? I remember reading short stories in high school and college. I liked the idea of taking a moment in time and really focusing on it. That’s something short stories do well. You can really focus on one moment and make the most of it. 

To me, it made a lot of sense to master the short story form before attempting to write a longer work, such as a novel. Iโ€™m not sure that is the best way to approach writing, or if itโ€™s even recommended, but thatโ€™s how I approached it. I wouldnโ€™t say Iโ€™ve mastered short stories, but Iโ€™ve definitely written a lot of them now. Iโ€™ve had a handful published individually in literary magazines. 

After putting together this short story collection, which is interconnected and themed, I realized that perhaps I could handle the intricacy and challenge of a full novel. I finally felt like taking that on. Thatโ€™s what Iโ€™m working on now. 

Thatโ€™s the path Iโ€™ve taken, but every writer I know has their own journey into writing and publishing. And if thereโ€™s anything Iโ€™ve learned from all the writing books, courses and podcasts, itโ€™s that every writer has a different path into writing. Some study it in college and go on to get MFAs, others just secretly write in their free time, never really expecting to see the light of day. Others go the journalism route. A lot of people start with a novel. 

I was told that a short story collection would be hard to sell, especially as a first book. I was disappointed, but determined to try. With the help of a writing coach and editor, I eventually found a small, independent publisher who was interested in publishing it, so I celebrated that win and was over the moon to have my collection out in the world.

If I had to do it over again, Iโ€™d do the same thing. Iโ€™d write my short stories, create a collection and then work on a novel, like I am now. Iโ€™m too early in my career to decide how successful itโ€™s been overall, but itโ€™s all I know and what Iโ€™ve done. And taking on any writing project is no small feat, so celebrate your writing and your path and donโ€™t let anyone tell you youโ€™re doing it wrong. 

Book Summary

Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas is a magical realism short story collection where the extraordinary sparks everyday lives toward transformation. Connected by Ripple Media, each of the fifteen characters navigates personal struggles, such as an impossible itch, a mercurial third eye, and hallucinating coffee. They discover hidden truths, purpose, or power. With whimsy and emotional depth, these stories explore identity, passion, and self-discovery through moments of enchantment that crack open ordinary reality. Let these tales remind you: sometimes, the most magical thing is becoming who you were always meant to be.

Publisher: Main Street Rag Publishing Company

ISBN-10: 978-1-964277-49-3

Print Length: 232 pages

Shopping Sites:

GoodReads: https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/234299217-let-birds-fly

Main Street Rag: https://mainstreetragbookstore.com/product/let-birds-fly-rhea-thomas/

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About the Author

Rhea Thomas lives in Austin, Texas where she works as a program manager in the digital media world. Her short stories have been published in multiple publications, including, most recently, The Fictional Cafรฉ, Toasted Cheese and Does It Have Pockets. She spends her free time hoarding books, walking her stubborn Labrador retriever, playing games with her sons, kayaking and swimming in rivers, searching for mysteries and writing short stories that explore magical moments in the mundane. Her first book, a collection of short stories, is due out in August 2025, and sheโ€™s currently working on a literary mystery novel. 

You can find her online at: 

https://rheathomasauthor.com/

https://www.facebook.com/rheathomasauthor

https://www.instagram.com/rheatellstales/

Blog Tour Calendar

October 13 @ The Muffin

Join us at the Muffin as we celebrate the launch of Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas. We interview the author and give you a chance to win a copy of the book.

https://muffin.wow-womenonwriting.com

October 14 @ Kaecey McCormick’s blog

Visit Kaecey’s blog for a guest post by Rhea Thomas on how to look for sparks of creativity during your day.

https://www.kaeceymccormick.com/blog

October 16 @ A Wonderful World of Words

Visit Joy’s blog for an excerpt from Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas.

https://awonderfulworldofwordsa.blogspot.com/

October 18 @ Nicole Writes About Stuff

Visit Nicole’s Substack for a feature of Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas in her weekly feature, 3 Things on a Saturday Night.

https://nicolepyles.substack.com/

October 20 @ Author Anthony Avina’s blog

Visit Anthony’s blog for his review of Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas.

https://www.authoranthonyavina.com

October 22 @ Sarandipity

Visit Sara’s blog for her interview with Rhea Thomas on her short story collection, Let Birds Fly.

October 24 @ CC King Blog

Visit Caitrin’s blog for a guest post by Rhea Thomas on Let Birds Fly.

https://www.caitrincking.com/blog

October 25 @ Nicole Writes About Stuff

Revisit Nicole’s blog for Rhea Thomas’ contribution to 3 Things on a Saturday Night

https://nicolepyles.substack.com/

October 27 @ Tracey Lampley’s blog

Visit Tracey’s blog for a guest post by Rhea Thomas about tips on reaching your ideal audience through social media.

https://www.traceylampley.com/guest-author-posts

October 30 @ Knotty Needle

Visit Judy’s blog for her review of Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas.

https://knottyneedle.blogspot.com

October 31 @ Guatemala Paula Loves to Read

Join Karen for her review of Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas.

https://guatemalapaula.blogspot.com/

November 1 @ Boots, Shoes, and Fashion

Stop by Linda’s blog for her interview with Rhea Thomas about her short story collection, Let Birds Fly.

https://bootsshoesandfashion.com

November 2 @ Chapter Break

Visit Julie’s blog for her review of Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas.

https://chapterbreak.net/

November 3 @ Word Magic

Visit Fiona’s blog for a post by Rhea Thomas, including tips on titling your stories.

https://fionaingramauthor.blogspot.com/

November 4 @ Author Anthony Avina’s blog

Visit Anthony’s blog again for a blog post by Rhea Thomas on why she started writing short stories.

https://www.authoranthonyavina.com

November 6 @ Knotty Needle

Stop by Judy’s blog again for her response to our tour-themed prompt about magical moments in her life.

https://knottyneedle.blogspot.com

November 7 @ CK Sorens’ Instagram

Carrie reviews Rhea Thomas ‘ short story collection Let Birds Fly on her Instagram page.

https://instagram.com/ck_sorens

November 7 @ Cassie’s Page

Cassie reviews Rhea Thomas ‘ short story collection Let Birds Fly on her Facebook page.

https://www.facebook.com/share/1D2cYrrc3d/

November 10 @ A Storybook World

Visit Deirdra’s blog for her feature of Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas.

https://www.astorybookworld.com/

November 12 @ Sarandipity

Don’t miss a guest post by Rhea Thomas about tips on reaching your audience through social media.

November 15 @ Teatime and Books

Visit Janet’s blog for a spotlight of Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas.

http://www.teatimeandbooks76.blogspot.com

November 16 @ CK Sorens’ Newsletter

Don’t miss Carrie’s newsletter that features Let Birds Fly by Rhea Thomas.

https://www.cksorens.com

GUEST POST: ON APPROPRIATION BY KAREN CHASE, AUTHOR OF TWO TALES: JAMALI KAMALI AND ZUNDELSTATE

On Appropriation

     For almost forever, writers have been advised to โ€œwrite what you know.โ€ At this tricky moment in our culture, that phrase has gathered momentum. Writing what you know is often a tidy and effective way not to appropriate someone elseโ€™s identity.

ย ย ย ย In my newly released book, Two Tales: Jamali Kamali and ZundelState, I have written two stories that did not grow from what I know but from what I donโ€™t know. In these pages, I will talk about the first tale. Jamali and Kamali lived in sixteenth century India and are buried together in a small tomb in India. The poem is a fictional account of their love, separation, and death.ย 

     Hereโ€™s what happened. In 2004, I spent a month-long writing residency at the Sanskriti Foundation in Delhi.  One morning, a week after I arrived โ€“ I hadnโ€™t written a thing that first week and didnโ€™t really care — the Sanskriti residents were told that later that day, we would have a chance to visit the newly restored Jamali Kamali Mosque and Tomb, which had been in the process of restoration for seven years. 

     Our bus arrived at the overgrown park entrance.  We traipsed alongside a river full of plastic garbage, climbed through hills of brush, climbed over unrestored ruins, climbed through Balbanโ€™s Tomb, and finally arrived on top of a hill, a plateau, where the Jamali Kamali Mosque and Tomb stood.  A brand-new sign at its entrance informed visitors that the Tomb held the remains of Jamali, a 16th century Sufi Court Poet and Saint and Kamali, whose identity, the sign said, was unknown.

     When I entered the tomb, its beauty startled me.  Looking at the two white marble graves, the conservator began to talk.  He explained who Jamali was, then said, โ€œIt is believed, through Delhiโ€™s oral tradition, that Kamali was his homosexual lover.โ€  โ€œWhat?โ€ I blurted out, โ€œButโ€ฆ. the new sign out front says his identity was unknown.  I donโ€™t understand.  Why does the sign say that Kamaliโ€™s identity is unknown.โ€  He explained that, in fact, no-one really knows for sure who Kamali was, and also the information that he may have been Jamaliโ€™s male lover would never be announced on a public sign, taking into account the beliefs of our large Muslim population.โ€  

     Deeply jarred by the disjuncture of that moment, when I returned to my Sanskriti desk, I began to write as if I were Jamali speaking to Kamali.  I had nothing in mind. No direction. By the end of three weeks in Delhi, there was a draft of the first section of Jamali Kamali.  Almost two years later, what began that moment in Delhi, had grown into a book-length poem.

     Many people have asked me, โ€œWhy did YOU write this book? The answer is – I donโ€™t really know. 

     Iโ€™m not a man.  Iโ€™m not gay. Iโ€™m not Indian.  Iโ€™m not Muslim. Iโ€™m not a Mughal scholar.  Iโ€™m not an art historian. Iโ€™m a straight white American Jewish 21st century woman. Iโ€™ve crossed many lines here โ€“ gender, sexual orientation, time, hemisphere, religion, culture, etcetera. Without intention, I appropriated.

    Since then, many people who have read Jamali Kamali, believe I was channeling the men. Others have mistaken it for a translation of Jamaliโ€™s poetry. And, strangely enough, in India, my poem has been cited numerous times as a historical record about the two men.

     Opening oneself to the unknown paves the way for large-scale exploration rather than the up-close, confining details of โ€œwhat I know.โ€ The unknown is a wider plainโ€”a vast place where options flourish. It expands the smallness of โ€œwhat I know.โ€ 

     Was I channeling these men? Is the poem an expression of my subconscious? Or is it the imagination at work? Are these three things separate, do they overlap, or are they the same thing? Who knows. What I do know is that when you open the mindโ€™s flaps, leave behind what you know, and walk through a blank landscape, you may be taken aback by what you find.

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About the Author

Karen Chase is the author of two collections of poems, Kazimierz Square and BEAR, as well as Jamali-Kamali: A Tale of Passion in Mughal India, a book-length homoerotic poem, published in India in 2011. Her award-winning book, Land of Stone, tells the story of her work with a silent young man in a psychiatric hospital where she was the hospital poet.

In her memoir Polio Boulevard, Chase brings the reader back to the polio outbreak of the 1950s that crippled our country. In her lively sickbed she experiences puppy love, applies to the Barbizon School of Modeling, and dreams of Franklin Delano Roosevelt. The Larooco Log: FDR on the Houseboat, a project that grew directly out of her memoir, follows Franklin Delano Roosevelt during a Florida winter when he lived on a houseboat, attempting to regain use of his paralyzed legs. History Is Embarrassing, her collection of essays, was published in 2024, and Two Tales: Jamali Kamali and ZundelState, in 2025.

Karen Chaseโ€™s poems, stories and essays have appeared in The New Yorker, The New Republic, The Gettysburg Review and Southwest Review, among others. Her poems have been anthologized in The Norton Introduction to Poetry, Andrei Codrescuโ€™s An Exquisite Corpse Reader, and Billy Collinsโ€™ Poetry 180. Chase and her husband, the painter Paul Graubard, live in Western Massachusetts.

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BLOG TOUR: CHAOS KIN By Sheryl R. Hayes (A Jordan Abbey Novel Book 3)

I always seen to get a question when people find out that Iโ€™m an author. โ€œHow did you start writing?โ€

You would think that is an easy question to answer.  I donโ€™t know about other authors, but I have a few different answers. Which one I give depends on what is meant by โ€˜start writing.โ€™

Iโ€™ve always told myself stories.  Some were about characters I saw on different characters on TV shows and books interacting.  Sometimes they were about characters I made up.  The earliest I vaguely remember had to do with me traveling to Narnia after I read C. S. Lewis when I would have been around ten years old. But I never actually wrote those stories down, so donโ€™t have the details of my adventures with Aslan, Lucy, Edmund, Susan and Peter.

Oddly enough, I never channeled that into my English classes in school beyond the necessary creative writing assignments.  Probably because at that time I had an interest in fantasy and science fiction, and I kept hearing from teachers that no woman who wanted to write seriously would write in those genres.  So giving into a misogyny that I didnโ€™t comprehend at the time, I kept those stories to myself as daydreams.

Then two things happened in the early nineties. I discovered the television show The X-Files, and I also got online.  My sister mentioned that she had seen an X-Files forum on America Online (yes, I was one of those people).  From there,  discovered online fandom in general, and fan fiction specifically.  I finally had a name to put to what I had been doing for years. So now my stories had a place to be shared.

Around the same time I also found an anthology titled originally enough Werewolves.  It was the first time I had come across stories about werewolves outside of the horror genre.  Mind you, the book did have short horror stories, but there was also humor and romance focused stories.  And it got me thinking.

The focus of my fanfic stories shifted from trying to stay relatively close to the canon of the series to an original creation.  A friend and I had both were complaining about being stuck on stories we were writing.  So we decided that weโ€™d both create a character, toss them together, and see what happened.  What happened was a 200 chapter, meandering paranormal romance that pulled in aspects of some tv shows, but had mostly original characters.  I learned about world-building, creating canon for your stories universe, sticking to that canon as you go forward in the story, and how to create the structure to hang your plot on.  It still exists on our hard drives, and occasionally I go back to peek at it.  While it was an incredible effort, it was ultimately unpublishable.  

My friend and I are still writing, by the way, but weโ€™ve shifted our focus.  We are currently working on a paranormal romance series.  The first book in it will be released later this year.

At this point, I had been going to conventions and met authors both in person and online.  It was at one of these conventions I had the seed of the idea for what would become the Jordan Abbey series. Using all I had learned over the years of writing as a hobby, and learning a lot more, I completed Chaos Wolf.  In the middle of writing what I thought would be a standalone book, I realized that there were a lot more stories in this universe that I could tell.

Chaos Kin is the most recent of these stories. I have a few more misadventures of Jordan Abbey that I hope to share, as well as a few more story seeds that I want to make bloom.

New Release: Chaos Kin - Sheryl R. Hayes

Sheryl R. Hayes has a new MMF paranormal book out (bi, poly), Jordan Abbey book 3: Chaos Kin.

In the town of Rancho Robles, can one werewolf protect the Children of the Wolf and the Bat? Chaos Wolf Jordan Abbey has made friends among the Black Oak Pack even though she refuses to join it. The same canโ€™t be said of the vampires, but her life has taken a turn for the better.

That is until Enya Blevins, sister to the werewolf who turned Jordan, arrives in Rancho Robles. She wants to know who killed her baby brother and is less than impressed by the Chaos Wolf. Enya wants revenge, starting with Jordan and ending with the vampires infesting the area.

Jordan is prepared to flee, but a technicality makes her an Alpha Werewolf. Now she must stand her ground to protect her nascent Pack and those she loves.

The past has come back to bite her. Does she have the fangs to bite back?

About the Series:

In the Northern California town of Rancho Robles where the Children of the Wolf and the Bat share an uneasy coexistence. One werewolf woman threatens to upset that balance.

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Excerpt:

MEME 2 - Chaos Kin

“You ready for this?”

Jordan nodded. She and Montgomery had pulled over three blocks from the entrance to the Black Oak Pack’s compound for one last quick discussion. “Got the Uber request programmed in to meet me here. If things go wrong, we run.”

Montgomery shook his head, hand tightening on the steering wheel. “No, you run.”

Jordan’s expression tightened. “I’m not leaving you.”

“Jordan, you have to run without me.” Montgomery stared at her until she looked away. “I know you’re afraid of what will happen to me. But they won’t harm me. To do so is to risk open conflict with Elder Marcus.”

Jordan bit back her response. Alpha Shane may have a vested interest in living in peace with the Elder of the Conclave of Rancho Robles. That didn’t mean that these strangers who came from far away would have the same desires. Add to the fact things were personal between Montgomery and Enya, and the odds were that they wouldn’t be thinking about insulting the vampires in the area.

She sighed and recited the plans they had come up with the night before. “If things go south, I run back to the Cataluรฑa and wait for you or Thorn. If after twenty-four hours, neither of you show up, I ask Elder Marcus for help getting someplace safe. You and Thorn will join me once you’re able to.”

Montgomery smiled and nodded. She noticed a tear in the corner of his eye. “Hopefully, it won’t come to that.”

She didn’t bother to say that he didn’t sound like he believed it any more than she did.

Jordan closed her eyes but lifted her head as she and Montgomery drove up to the gate of the Black Oak Pack’s home territory. As if by mutual consent, neither of them spoke as Sentry Rodriguez waved them through. There was no point hashing out their plans further. In the next ten minutes, they would know if she would have to run and hide with her tail between her legs.

The silence continued as they walked to the front door. Angela opened the door before she had a chance to knock on it, focusing on Jordan instead of Montgomery. The blonde blond werewolf arched her eyebrows in a question.

Jordan shook her head ever so slightly.

Angela’s lips pressed together as she narrowed her eyes. Jordan could hear her thoughts. Why am I not surprised? Instead, she gestured them inside. “This way please.”

The entire pack was gathered, clumping together in little knots around the room. Pamela met her eyes and then turned her attention back to her conversation with Tran. Alpha Shane, Envoy Blevins, and Talespeakers stood by the cold, dark fireplace. Angela took her place with the rest of the younger people in the room. The tension in the room ramped up as the four highest-ranking werewolves focused on her and Montgomery. Alpha Shane dipped his head in greeting. “Chaos Wolf Abbey, Mr. Cooper.”

Enya was far less formal, not giving Montgomery and Jordan a chance to greet them. She assessed Jordan, head lifted so she stared down her nose. “Were you able to retrieve the fangs?”

Jordan drew herself up to stand straight and as tall as she could. “No.”

Everyone around her tensed, which she expected.

“This isn’t her fault,” Montgomery said. “She didn’t knowโ€””

“Silence, vampire!” Enya snapped. Her focus was on Jordan as she paced forward. “It’s not completely your fault. I blame you as much as I blame him.” She nodded towards Alpha Shane. “And him.” Her gaze turned towards Montgomery.

Alpha Shane’s shoulders hunched. He shifted his weight but said nothing.

She felt her ears flatten, an impressive trick as she was in her human form. Jordan opened her mouth, trying to force her words through her snarl. To her surprise, Billy, Juan, Tran, and Maria surrounded her and Montgomery with Angela taking the point in front of Jordan. Jordan couldn’t see her expression, but the young woman stood stiffly, legs apart, and fists braced on her waist.

Confused, Jordan looked at Billy on her right, eyes wide. “What’s going on?” she whispered as Montgomery put a hand on her shoulder.

“We’re saving your skin,” he said. “Now, shush.”

Angela looked at Enya. “Jordan shouldn’t be treated as a chaos wolf. She isโ€””

โ€œAngela!โ€ Alpha Shane barked, glaring at her.

His daughter didn’t stop speaking. โ€œโ€”An alpha wolf in her own right.”


Author Bio

Sheryl R. Hayes can be found untangling plot threads or the yarn her three cats have been playing with. She is equally likely to be shooing one of them off the keyboard as she is working on her novels and short stories. In addition to writing, she is a cosplayer focusing on knit and crochet costumes.

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Blog Tour: Broken Mirror by Cody Sisco + Guest Blog Post

Broken Mirror - Cody Sisco

Cody Sisco has a new queer sci-fi mystery thriller out, Resonant Earth book one: Broken Mirror. And there’s a giveaway!

A fractured mind or a global conspiracy? Uncovering the truth can be hell when nobody believes youโ€ฆ and you canโ€™t even trust yourself.

Broken Mirror is the first volume in a queer psychological science fiction saga that looks at the stigma of mental illness and the hellish distrust and alienation that goes with it.

Victor Eastmore knows someone killed his grandfather, the pioneering scientist Jefferson Eastmore. But Victor, diagnosed with mirror resonance syndrome, has been shunned by Semiautonomous California society. Nobody will believe a Broken Mirror. Now Victor must tread the line between sanity and reclassificationโ€”a fate that all but guarantees heโ€™ll lose his freedom.

With its self-driving cars, global firearms ban, and a cure for cancer, the science fiction world of Broken Mirror may sound like a near future utopia, but on Resonant Earth, history has taken a few wrong turns. The American Union is a weak and fractious alliance of nations in decline. Europe manipulates its citizens through propaganda. And Asia is reeling from decades of war.

Determined to uncover the truth about Jeffersonโ€™s murder, pansexual Victor and his trans friend Elena set out on a road trip that takes them across the American Union from Semiautonomous California through the Organized Western States to the Republic of Texas. But Elena is holding something back, and Victorโ€™s condition worsens.

Amid shifting geopolitical sands, Broken Mirrors like Victor find themselves at a cyberpunk crossroads: evolve or go extinct.

Warnings: violence, discrimination against characters with mental health challenges

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Giveaway

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Excerpt

Broken Mirror Meme

A new universe, its vibrations, called to me, and I answered, ignorant of the harm in crossing over.
โ€”Victor Eastmore, Apology to Resonant Earth, (transmission date unknown)

Semiautonomous California
29 February 1991

Itโ€™s one thing to die quietly with things left unsaid among family members. Itโ€™s another thing to do what the great Jefferson Eastmore did with his secrecy and architecture of conspiracy: keep essential truths from Victor and put him on a collision course with an uncanny future.

Victor gazed across City Lake toward the tessellated foothills, where the elite families of Oakland and Bayshore kept their hedges trimmed and thorny. His grandfatherโ€™s sarcophagus was up there, surrounded by marble pillars and gold-gilt fencing shaped like twisted strands of DNA. A tidy and neat brick gravemound would never have sufficed, since at the end of his life, Jefferson was as grandiose as his cancer-curing career. The stones were plucked from the canals of New Venice, and a plaque listed the manโ€™s many accomplishments. Not listed was his failed effort to cure Victor of mirror resonance syndrome.

Victor spun around to face the city skyline. The morning was bright and windy. The timefeed on his MeshBit indicated thirty minutes until his reclassification appointment. He could go and wait in the anteroom, but his anxious vibrations might shake the building to its foundations.

He took a breath. No going back. Before the sun reached its zenith that day, his path would materialize. If he were lucky, he could stay a Class Three: free but under close supervision. Or he could become a Class Two: under guard, imprisoned, at a rancho in the hinterlands. He whispered a cherished but inconsistently effective mantra to fight off brain blankness: The wise owl listens before asking who. Each episode of blanking out was one more step toward mirror resonance syndromeโ€™s inevitable tragic end: becoming a comatose Class One, insensate, a forgotten ward of the government. The only unknown factor was how quickly the future would crash against him.

He trudged along the shoreline, tensing and relaxing his jaw, trying to distract himself. Glittering towers rose exultantly cityside. Squally breezes swooped out of a cloudless, azure sky and assaulted bulrushes, sedges, and cattails in the shallows where a grid of waterplots penned them in.

Granfa Jefferson had been poisoned. Victor knew it. He had proof. But his family didnโ€™t believe him, and if he said any more about it, he would be locked away. Fair? No. Surprising? Not really. After all, his life was a farcical succession of tragedies. It wasnโ€™t time to give up, though. Not while he had unanswered questions.

The palm trees encircling the lake rustled like cheerleaders shaking their pom-poms. The water rippled, creating countless sun flashes on the lakeโ€™s surface, and afterimages glowed and pulsed when he closed his eyes. The stench of goose shit turned his stomach.

He wedged the MeshBitโ€™s detachable sonobulb in his ear, then called Elena. She answered right away. This was not the first time her promptness was suspicious.

โ€œSee?โ€ she said. โ€œWhen a friend calls, you should answer. Right away. Not never.โ€

โ€œI know. I need your help,โ€ he said. โ€œMy appointment is here. Iโ€™m having trouble.โ€

โ€œWhere are you?โ€ she asked.

โ€œCity Lake. West shore.โ€

โ€œI canโ€™t get there in time.โ€

You were there for Granfa Jeffโ€™s funeral. You showed up at my apartment whenever you wanted. Why canโ€™t you be here now?

โ€œThen talk to me,โ€ Victor said. โ€œAnything to keep my mind off my theories about Granfa Jeff.โ€

At the time, Victor had nothing close to the truth about Jeffersonโ€™s secret messages and plans for conspiracy and counter-conspiracy. He couldnโ€™t have guessed his role in the proliferating conflagration that would transform every person on Resonant Earth and beyond. No one could have predicted the neuro-contagion that eventually radiated beyond the American Union of Nations, or the mind-machine hybridization that became humanityโ€™s destiny, or the fact that crossing over to another world would become a possibility rather than paranoia. If Victor had guessed any of it, he might have failed his reclassification deliberately and shown up at the gates of a rancho to check himself in. All this was a lot to have piled onto a mentally unstable young adult.

โ€œBut you found radiation on the data egg,โ€ Elena said. โ€œI believe you. Weโ€™re going to figure this out.โ€


Author Bio

Cody Sisco

Cody Sisco is an author, editor, publisher, and literary community organizer. His LGBT psychological science fiction series includes two novels thus far, Broken Mirror and Tortured Echoes. He is a freelance editor specializing in genre-bending fiction and the acquisitions editor for RIZE Press. In 2017, he co-founded Made in L.A. Writers, an indie author co-op dedicated to the support and appreciation of independent authors. His startup, BookSwell, is a literary events and media production company dedicated to lifting up marginalized voices and connecting readers and writers in Southern California and beyond. He serves as a co-executive on the Board of Governors for the Editorial Freelancers Association, as the treasurer for the LGBTQ+ Editors Association, and as a board member at APLA Health.

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Is Utopia a Dirty Word? 

Broken Mirror

In the world of Broken Mirror, cancer has been cured, civil rights for all citizens of the American Union of Nations are respected, and guns are strictly regulated everywhere. At first glance, I can see why you might think itโ€™s a utopia. Indeed, librarians catalogued the book that way.

Cataloging is an interesting process. Publishers submit their data to wholesalers and retailers using standard categories. But librarians also have a say on how a book is categorized. Itโ€™s their expertise and their domain. So it was at first a surprise and then a delight, after the first edition of Broken Mirror was published in 2016 and I was looking up where the book was available at libraries across the country, when I discovered that it had been categorized under Utopias and Utopian Fiction, among other designations. 

Fast forward to when I attended the American Library Association conference this year in San Diego. The convention centerโ€”the same one that hosts Comic Conโ€”was filled with people who work with books in all kinds of ways. There were authors, publishers, artists, publicists, technologists, and of course librarians. The librarians who attended were looking for books to acquire but also for ideas and systems to help them run programs for their patrons, which vary from book collections and author talks to crafts, literacy courses, VR and technology hubs, and much more. In a way, libraries are the custodians of a utopian version of the future that is accessible, small-d democratic, and built on concepts of intellectual freedom, self-improvement, and community care. 

However, I can understand how readers might have some qualms about calling my book a utopia. First, itโ€™s too dark. Kirkus Reviews wrote that โ€œthe world and the characters work together to effectively form a cohesive story about how easy it is for society to classify a group of people as dangerous outsiders.โ€ Juliana Caro reviewed the book for Reedsy and called it โ€œa breathtaking, deeply dark alternate-history Earth with complex characters, layered worldbuilding, and twist after twist after twist.โ€ Bleak, right?

The other problem with calling Broken Mirror a utopian book is that, when I try out the phrase, I get too many blank stares in response. Everyone is very clued in to what a dystopia is: the end of the world, things changing in unsettling ways, dark powers controlling things in secret. There are some elements of this in my book, but theyโ€™re balanced by those nice things like everyone enjoying civil rights. 

The story is also definitely not about a false utopia, where things appear great on the surface, but danger lurks beneath the surface. The dangers in my book are part of the premise and they are front and center on purpose. We are familiar with false utopias through tropes introduced to the popular imagination by Twilight Zone, Star Trek, and many others, such as The Truman Show, Black Mirror, WandaVision, etc. But Iโ€™ve always been writing what I see as a realistic and balanced story about how our present could be if we made different choices throughout our history.

It’s important to note that a utopia is not a place where everything is perfect. Itโ€™s a thought experiment that imagines different structures and forces, sometimes hidden, sometimes plain as day, that shape society.

Iโ€™m coming to terms with the label of utopian fiction. Resonant Earth imagines an alternate history of Reconstruction after the U.S. Civil War being successful. In other words, formerly enslaved people gain full citizenship and civil rights. Women were a key part of the abolitionist movement, so I also imagined that they won the right to vote and full participation in civic life and the economy. Imagine if America could wake itself from all its awful, destructive, and painful -isms by the turn of the century (and by that I mean 1900). What kind of world would we live in today?

It’s very easy to become pessimistic about the future of humanity. Global conflict, biosphere degradation, the simply terrifying physics of climate changeโ€”who is going to save the world from such calamities? The answer is that each of us as individuals can come together to implement solutions. If I canโ€™t live in utopia, at least I can write about one, live there in my imagination, and bring that creativity and resolve back into the real world. 

Blog Tour: All Money Ainโ€™t Good Money By Tracey Lampley Guest Blog Post

Making The Leap from Novella to Novel

In 2013, I ventured into the publishing world with my first novella in my romantic suspense series titled Kept. For my tastes, novellas arguably clock in between 20,000 and just shy of 40,000 words in length. But I soon discovered readers preferred novels to novellas. And pricing between these books were as different as night and day. 

To sell books at the price I wanted, I needed to write novels and not novellas. But I lacked patience and qualifications to write a novel. Besides, I preferred writing short stories and novellas. I still have some shorts and novellas that I need to dust off, slap a book cover on and upload for the world to see. Since I always dreamed of becoming a best-selling author, and I always considered myself a writer, I decided to obtain the qualifications and patience to write that elusive novel, and perhaps, join the ranks of becoming an indie best-selling novelist. 

Almost three years ago I enrolled in the Master of Arts Program in Creative Writing at Southern New Hampshire University, and I never looked back. In the first two classes of the online program, I learned about fiction fundamentals, structure and outlining a novel. In fact, it was in one of those classes that I outlined my debut mystery All Money Ainโ€™t Good Money as my final project. I transformed that outline into a 68,000-word novel. My educational investment paid off in more ways than one. 

Donโ€™t get me wrong. Writing novellas are great practice for expansion into writing the novel. With novellas, the writer concentrates on developing the main character and one or two plot lines. But in a novel, a writer can develop multiple characters and can run multiple plot lines simultaneously to keep the pages turning. Engaging the reader and securing future book sales is the goal. So, there is no shame in writing novellas. Itโ€™s just cuing you up to write for a bigger audience, readers seeking the page-turning novel. 

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Book Summary

Jinx Curry is a single mom who spends her days spying on cheating wives and husbands, but she aches for more importance. When her boss, Capricorn Hayes, finally assigns Jinx a missing persons case involving a congressman’s missing granddaughter, Jinx jumps at the chance. Not only to solve it, but to earn the fifty-thousand-dollar bonus that would pay her bills, and get a menacing creditor off her back.

But the investigation proves more dangerous and costly than Jinx believes. After an unknown individual in a black Corvette nearly runs Jinx down and begins stalking her, Jinx has to sacrifice her relationship with her daughter by sending Arielle to live with her father. Can Jinx find the congressman’s granddaughter while surviving her stalker? Or will this job be her last?

Publisher: Tralam Publishing Company (July 26, 2024)

Print length:  276 pages

Purchase a copy of All Money Ainโ€™t Good Money on

Amazon:  https://www.amazon.com/All-Money-Aint-Good-Mystery-ebook/dp/B0CW1DW3SX

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You can also add this to your GoodReads reading list 

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About the Author

When she is not writing, Tracey Lampley loves attending and watching sporting events such as WNBA, NBA, college football and NFL football. Currently Tracey is completing her MA in Creative Writing at Southern New Hampshire University. She already holds an MS in Publishing from Pace University and a BA in English/Technical & Scientific Communication from Miami University of Ohio. She resides in the metro Atlanta, Georgia area with her pooch Neo and near her daughter Asia.

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Blog Tour Calendar

August 12th @ The Muffin

Join us as we celebrate the launch of Tracey Lampley’s novel All Money Ain’t Good Money. Read an interview with the author and enter to win a copy of her book.

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August 14th @ Words by Webb

Stop by for today’s review of All Money Ain’t Good Money – a Jinx Curry Mystery.

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August 16th @ My Beauty My Books

Want a fun read for the weekend? Check out the spotlight on All Money Ain’t Good Money by Tracey Lampley.

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August 17th @ Writer Advice

Novelist Tracey Lampley shares her thoughts on the value of planting a red herring.

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August 19 @  Lisa Haseltonโ€™s Reviews and Interviews

Let’s take a peek at the life of an author with today’s interview of Tracey Lampley.

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August 21st @ Chapter Break

Tracey Lampley, who writes about private investigator Jinx Curry, posts about why we all love a flawed protaganist.

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August 22nd @ Knotty Needle

The Knotty Needle will be reviewing All Money Ain’t Good Money by Tracey Lampley.

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August 22nd @ Book Room Reviews

Stop by for a surprise guest post by Tracey Lampley, author of All Money Ain’t Good Money.

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August 24th @  Author Anthony Avina

Learn how Tracey Lampley made the Leap from Novella to Novel in today’s guest post plus a review of All Money Ain’t Good Money by Anthony Avina.

https://authoranthonyavinablog.wordpress.com

August 28th @ Create Write Now

In today’s spotlight, learn more about the first Jinx Curry mystery: All Money Ain’t Good Money.

https://www.createwritenow.com/journal-writing-blog

August 30th @ Choices

Tracey Lampley, author of All Money Ain’t Good Money, is telling us the six authors she’d like to invite for a dinner party in today’s guest post.

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August 31st @ A Wonderful World of Words

Novelist Tracey Lampley writes about what her life was like before she began writing today at Wonderful World of Words.

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September 3rd @ StoreyBook Reviews

Drop by for a review of All Money Ain’t Good Money by Tracey Lampley.

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September 4th @  Author Anthony Avina

Enjoy Anthony Avina’s review of All Money Ain’t Good Money by Tracey Lampley.

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September 5 @ Word Magic

Tracey Lampley, author of All Money Ain’t Good Money, is writing about life with her canine buddy Neo.

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September 6th @ A Story Book World

Looking for a new novel? Today’s spotlight is on All Money Ain’t Good Money by Tracey Lampley.

https://www.astorybookworld.com

September 7 @ Boys’ Mom Reads!

Tracey Lampley’s All Money Ain’t Good Money is reviewed today by Karen of Boys’ Mom Reads.

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September 9th @ Nikki’s Book Reviews

Along with a review of All Money Ain’t Good Money, author Tracey Lampley will be posting about what she likes best about Live Sports Events. 

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September 12th @ Reading Is My Remedy

Struggle with what your characters should say? Author Tracey Lampley’s guest post is about writing realistic dialogue. They’ll also be a review of her novel All Money Ain’t Good Money.

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September 14th @ That’s So Nitra

Learn the difference between Macro editing and Micro editing with the help of Tracey Lampley.

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September 15th @ Boots, Shoes and Fashion

In today’s interview, learn more about Tracey Lampley, author of the first book in the Jinx Curry mystery series: All Money Ain’t Good Money.

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7 Tips Every Writer Needs to Know About Writing Charactersย by Ana Obradoviฤ‡

The goal of every writer is to craft original characters that readers will remember. In a book, a movie, or a short story –ย  having interesting characters is the key to keeping readers interested. You know we all love a good writer, but letโ€™s be honest – people have always cared the most about characters. Let’s talk about seven tips for making characters that stand out. From giving them detailed backgrounds to showing their growth and relationships. These ideas will help you make your characters feel real. We’ll also discuss the importance of giving characters both strengths and weaknesses and accepting their imperfections. By using these methods, you can make characters that feel like real people and keep readers hooked!ย 

1. Show, donโ€™t tell

Show, don’t tell is one of the main principles in character writing. Instead of just saying they’re brave or kind, demonstrate it through their actions. Let their courage shine through daring deeds, like running into a burning building. Show their kindness through helping others or comforting friends. This not only makes your characters more relatable but also brings them to life.

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2. Develop Deep Backstories

Adding layers of depth and realism to your writing is something you can easily achieve by fixing your characterโ€™s backstory! By delving into their past, you reveal the driving forces and life experiences that influence their choices and behaviors. It’s more than just listing significant events; it’s about grasping their hopes, fears, and motivations. Using tools like character profiles or character planners can assist you in this process. They are built to enable you to fully explore your ocs and their backgrounds. Keep in mind that not every aspect of the background will be included in your story. But it will ensure your characters act in a coherent and believable manner.

Example: Severus Snape‘s background in Harry Potter is a great example of how a character can grow.  Snape didnโ€™t have a happy childhood, he found comfort in his friendship with Lily Evans. Even though he joined the bad guys as a Dbut eath Eater, Snape cared so much about Lily that he switched sides when Voldemort went after her. Working as a spy for Dumbledore, Snape acted tough but he was actually trying to do the right thing and make sacrifices – character complexity at its best. His journey from a troubled kid to a hero with a sad ending makes for one of the pivotal moments in the overall story.

3. Give Each Character a Unique Voice:

 To make each character stand out, focus on how they talk and think differently. Consider their vocabulary and tone to show their personality and experiences. For instance, a character with an academic background may speak formally with complex sentences, whereas a street-smart character may use slang and brief phrases. Don’t forget to explore their inner thoughts and reactions to the world. By keeping these distinct voices consistent, readers can easily recognize each character and see them come alive with unique personalities.

4. Create Flawed Characters

Giving your characters bad habits and flaws might sound tough. Like you would want to add a bad trait to your kid on purpose. But hereโ€™s what – theyโ€™ll still have flaws. Instead of creating perfect characters, give them flaws, fears, and vulnerabilities to make them more relatable and engaging. These imperfections provide opportunities for growth, conflict, and dynamic storytelling, ultimately leading to their development. And this leads us to the next tip. Creating a character profile can help you. Put your thoughts on paper or phones and see how it gets easier to strike the balance of a relatable character.

5. Ensure Characters Evolve and Grow

Throughout the story, characters should change in meaningful ways that show how their experiences and challenges have affected them. This transformation keeps the story interesting and exciting. For example, a shy character could start by avoiding conflict, but as they face different obstacles, they might become more confident and stand up for themselves for a change. A character who is initially selfish could learn about compassion and sacrifice through their own mistakes. On the other hand, a character who starts off as idealistic might become more cynical after seeing unfairness, which could change their perspective. These changes make the characters more believable and keep readers interested in their journey, wondering how they will grow and develop.

Example: Tony Stark (Iron Man)
Initial Character: Arrogant, wealthy industrialist focused on profit.
Catalyst: Captured by terrorists, sees the harm caused by his weapons.
Becoming Iron Man: Builds the Iron Man suit, and vows to fight for justice.
Personal Growth: Faces PTSD, moral dilemmas, and learns
Redemption: Sacrifices himself in “Avengers: Endgame” to save the whole universe.

This is a great example of character evolution –  from a self-centered billionaire to a selfless hero, which is what makes him an iconic character.

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6. Balance Strengths and Weaknesses

Great characters always have a mix of good and bad traits. This mix makes them more interesting and easier to believe in. For instance, a character might be super smart and great at solving tough problems but struggle with talking to people and feel lonely a lot. Another character could be really strong and brave, always ready to take action, but they might also act without thinking and make bad choices. A caring and understanding character might be really good at helping others and understanding their feelings, but they might also take things too personally and get upset easily. Your flaws and mistakes are what make you relatable – why would it be different for your character?  Of course, they have room to grow and change as the story goes on. This mix makes sure that no character is perfect, which leads to interesting conflicts and stories that are all about the characters.

Example: Sherlock Holmes (Arthur Conan Doyle)
Sherlock Holmes is a super popular character known for his amazing detective skills. However, he also has a big list of flaws to โ€œcompensateโ€ for being a genius. Despite having sharp observational skills, he can be socially awkward, dismissive of others, struggles with forming emotional connections, comes off as arrogant, and insensitive, often taking risks, turns to substance abuse, and the list goes on. Holmes is a super smart guy, but he’s not perfect. That’s what makes him so interesting! He’s really good at solving mysteries, but he also has some flaws that make him more human and therefore relatable. 


7. Keep Your Characters Consistent

It’s super important to keep your charactersโ€™ behavior consistent. Think about how people always act in ways that make sense based on who they are. If a character is all about paying attention to details, it wouldn’t make sense for them to suddenly start being careless without a good reason. You can use tools like character profiles to help you stay on track and make sure your characters stay true to who they are. Popular websites like CharacterHub or Toyhouse are great for storing all of your character information. This helps your readers trust you and keeps your story strong and interesting.

Conclusion

If you follow these seven important tips when you write, your characters will start feeling like real people that your readers will love. Characters are the most important part of a good story – their adventures, challenges, friendships, and changes. Make sure to give them detailed backgrounds, and unique voices, and show their growth and development. Also, when creating and managing your characters, use character storage websites so you can remember all the important details and make your story more consistent.. By doing all this, you’ll create a story that feels real – your readers will really appreciate it!